you can add “how we can applied Nanotechnology in Sewage water or wastewater by using Nanotechnology?”

Hello,
1- please follow thesis statement format?
2- you can do comparative analysis between two companies that are using Nanotechnology for water purification and treatment water
3- you can add “how we can applied Nanotechnology in Sewage water or wastewater by using Nanotechnology?”
4- if we can move this technology to Kingdom of Saudi Arabia or the third world for example Africa or middle East,ect.
5-add some charts or Pic or statistical analysis
6- you can modify old outline and add more points as you need